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A Pregnancy To Remember
Emily looked around her, frantically, in search of HIM. Him, her love, her soulmate, her other half.
The only one that could make her feel better right now.
She spotted him sitting down on a bench next to his best friend, Leslie. "Luke..." she said, softly.
He looked up and saw the tears welling up in her eyes. He took her hand and walked with her to a small dairy shop and sat her down in a bright yellow booth. They hadn't said anything yet.
"Baby, what's wrong?" Luke asked her, struggling to look into her eyes. "Emily, look at me..."
She couldn't. She couldn't tell him. She couldn't tell him how the one time they'd made love she'd gotten pregnant.
But she had to. "Luke. I don't know how to tell you this..." Her voice cracked as a single tear rolled down her cheek.
"You can tell me ANYTHING," he told her. He scooted closer and wrapped his arm around her shoulder, enclosing her in a tight embrace.
"I'm pregnant."
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By mysteriouswriter93 on 8 February, 2008, 9:08 am
More 2 come, everyone!!
Let me know what you think. Don't be afraid to criticize.
How can i make this story better? What do you want to see happen?
I want your help! :))
By snina_smith on 15 February, 2008, 6:23 pm
i think that you need to continue with the suspence, new suprises, its relly good so far, but hold the suspence longer for the character, and be sur to make the reaction of the boy friend something the reader didnt expect, like he ment to, or he leaves her, or something big. :)
By ashley_fabolous on 17 February, 2008, 11:15 am
i luv it. I hope u write more. :)
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